| 30 May 2008 | Dragomir Cristian Madalin | its very expressive and the story is very nice  i like it, it’s simple yet it needs more work done on it   Santiago Rodriguez replies: "What do u suggest?" | |
| 31 May 2008 | Dragomir Cristian Madalin | from my point the picture is like this: first i see a bush, then i see a agonized human form, then i see FAR away a giant tower of blue stuff that is actually watter if my guess is right  , the background get consumed by the center of the picture. My suggestion would be to not make the tower of light seem that far away, but actually in the same spot as the bush and human and the background a little more arid looking, don’t know some cracks and a dark sky, maintain the background’s color though  | |
| 14 Jun 2008 | A. Setliffe | O_o one heck of a story!
Your composition is good, and I love the shape and movement of it/  Santiago Rodriguez replies: "I’d like to write the whole story some day! lol too bad I don’t have the skills nor the patience required to do so, so in the mean time i’ll just draw them" | |